Mastering B2B SaaS Copywriting: Conveying Value at Every Touchpoint

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Introduction

In the competitive world of Business-to-Business (B2B) Software as a Service (SaaS), effective communication is key. It’s not just about selling a product; it’s about conveying the value of your software in a way that resonates with your target audience. B2B SaaS copywriting is an art that combines the precision of technical understanding with the persuasion of marketing.

But how do you ensure that your message is not only heard but also understood and appreciated? The secret lies in consistently communicating your value proposition, not just through promotional materials, but across every interaction with your SaaS–from the application user interface to transactional emails.

This article dives deep into the strategies for crafting compelling B2B SaaS copy that speaks directly to your customer’s needs, whether it’s bridging a knowledge gap, enhancing efficiency, or both. We’ll explore how to clarify and communicate your SaaS’s value at every touchpoint, turning your copywriting into a powerful tool for business growth.

Understanding Your SaaS Value Proposition

The cornerstone of any effective B2B SaaS marketing strategy is a clear, compelling value proposition. This is the promise you make to your customers, answering the critical question: “Why should I choose your software?” Your value proposition should articulate the problem your SaaS solves and the unique benefits your SaaS offers, tailored to meet the specific needs of your target market.

Identifying Your Unique Value

Start by understanding what sets your SaaS apart. Does your software save time? Reduce costs? Simplify complex processes? It’s essential to pinpoint the unique advantages your product offers. Continually conduct market research, gather customer feedback, and analyze your competitors to distill what makes your SaaS unique.

Knowledge Gap vs. Efficiency Gap

Almost all SaaS systems address one of two main needs: a knowledge gap or an efficiency gap. If your software provides insights, data, or knowledge that users can’t easily find elsewhere, it fills a knowledge gap. On the other hand, if it automates tasks, streamlines workflows, or enhances productivity, it bridges an efficiency gap. Identifying which of these your SaaS addresses helps tailor your message to highlight the most relevant benefits.

Real-World Examples

Take, for example, a SaaS like Salesforce. Its value proposition revolves around not just managing customer relationships but transforming them through insightful data and analytics–addressing a knowledge gap. Alternatively, tools like Asana emphasize streamlining project management, thus addressing an efficiency gap by boosting productivity.

Incorporating Your Value Proposition in Promotional Materials

Your value proposition should be the heartbeat of all your promotional materials. Whether it’s your website, brochures, or digital ads, each piece should clearly communicate the benefits of your SaaS.

Strategies for Emphasizing Value in B2B SaaS Promotions

  • Website Content: Your website is often the first point of contact for potential customers. Every page should highlight your SaaS’s value proposition, using clear, jargon-free language that speaks directly to the visitor’s pain points and how their business will benefit from using your SaaS to address those problems.
  • Advertising: In your digital ads, focus on the outcomes your software enables. Use compelling headlines and calls to action (CTAs) that draw attention to the benefits of using your SaaS.
  • Brochures and Sales Collateral: These should not simply list features and integrations, but explain how such functionality translates into real-world organizational benefits such as increased revenue or decreased costs. Use case studies, concrete outcome data, and testimonials to add credibility and demonstrate value in action. 
Here are other considerations that are particularly important in writing copy for B2B SaaS promotions:
  • Multiple Decision-Makers: In B2B SaaS, the decision-making process often involves multiple stakeholders, each with their own concerns and priorities. Your copy should address the diverse needs of various roles, from technical users to executive decision-makers, emphasizing how your software benefits the entire organization.
  • Security and Compliance: Addressing concerns about data security and regulatory compliance is critical in B2B SaaS. Ensure your copy communicates the steps your offering takes to secure data and comply with industry-specific regulations.
  • Customization and Support: B2B clients may require more customized solutions and robust customer support. Highlight the availability of tailored configurations, dedicated support, and training resources offered by your SaaS.
  • Trust and Credibility: Establishing trust is vital in B2B relationships. Use authoritative content, endorsements from other businesses, certifications, and awards to build credibility.

Consistency is Key

The messaging across all materials should be consistent. This consistency reinforces your value proposition, making it more memorable and compelling to your audience. In fact, everyone in your SaaS company should be trained on how to talk about your offering in the same way (e.g., a company-wide “elevator pitch”).

Beyond Promotion: Integrating Value in the SaaS Application Itself

A truly effective B2B SaaS copywriting strategy extends into the software application itself. The in-app experience is a critical touchpoint for reinforcing the value proposition.

In-App Value Communication

  • User Interface Copy: The language used in your software’s interface should consistently reflect its value. For instance, if your SaaS enhances efficiency, phrases like “Save time with…” or “Streamline your process by…” can be powerful.
  • Tooltips and Knowledge Bases: These often overlooked areas are perfect opportunities to remind users of the benefits they’re getting. Instead of just instructive text, add context on how a feature adds value.
  • Product Tours: Product tours within your SaaS application offer a dynamic way to communicate value directly to users. By guiding new users through key features and functionalities, these tours can vividly demonstrate how your software solves specific problems or enhances efficiency, making the value proposition clear and experiential.

Example of Effective In-App SaaS Copywriting

In QuickBooks, in-app copy encourages the user to use the reconciliation feature by listing three benefits of doing so in a concise bullet-point list, directly linking functionality with benefits.

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Example of Effective Knowledge Base SaaS Copywriting

The Zoho CRM knowledge base begins these help pages with the benefits of using the feature before providing instructions on how to do so.

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Transactional Emails as a Platform for Value Communication

Transactional emails are not just administrative; they’re an opportunity to reinforce your SaaS’s value proposition. Every email sent from your system, whether it’s an onboarding message, a payment notification, or an account update, is a chance to communicate value.

Crafting Impactful Transactional Emails

  • Onboarding Emails: Welcome emails should reinforce the decision to choose your SaaS. Highlight key features and benefits, and guide new users on getting the most value from your software.
  • Payment Notifications: Even payment confirmations can remind users of the value they’re getting. A simple line like “Your subscription continues to unlock efficient project management for your team” can be effective.
  • Usage-Related Emails: Subtly weave in your SaaS’s value proposition by highlighting how the specific features being used have contributed to improving efficiency or knowledge, thereby reinforcing the ongoing benefits the user gains from your service. For example, you can let the user know how much time their organization has saved by using an automated workflow.
  • Inactivity Email Notifications: When addressing a user’s inactivity, you can gently remind them of the value they’re missing out on by not using the system, for example: ‘We’ve noticed you haven’t used [Feature] recently. Remember, it’s designed to [specific benefit, e.g., streamline your workflow or provide crucial insights], helping you to achieve [specific outcome, e.g., greater efficiency or better decision-making]. We’re here to help you get the most out of our services.’
  • Cancellation Emails: By succinctly reminding churning customers of the unique benefits and solutions your software offers, you can leave a lasting impression that may encourage them to reconsider or return in the future.
  • Notice of New Features: An email about a new feature can be framed not just as an announcement, but as an enhancement to the user’s experience, directly linking the new feature to the benefits users care about.

Examples from Other SaaS Providers

Many leading SaaS companies use transactional emails not just to convey information and validate new users’ email addresses, but to enhance customer engagement and reinforce the perceived value of their software. Each email is an opportunity to remind users why they chose your SaaS in the first place.

Example #1: Effective SaaS Email Copy

A good example of B2B SaaS copywriting can be found in Motion’s onboarding sequence, in this case an email reminder to complete the setup process. They not only remind the user of what the system does (i.e., bridge an efficiency gap), but they also quantify the potential results and contrast that value against the affordable price.

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Example #2: Effective SaaS Email Footer

Asana tends to keep their transactional emails quite minimalistic. However, on this routine email they capitalize on the footer here to convey their value proposition without adding any fluff to the transactional content above.

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Example #3: Less Effective SaaS Email Copy

This email copy is upbeat and provides a valuable security tip. However, at no point does it remind the reader what Guso does. This email in particular would be an excellent opportunity to point out one or more key features that a new admin user may find valuable.

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Overcoming Challenges in Conveying Value

B2B SaaS copywriting can be challenging. The complexity of the software, the sophistication of the target audience, and the crowded marketplace can make it difficult to convey your value proposition effectively. However, clear and effective communication is essential for conveying value to potential and current customers.

Simplifying Complex Value Propositions

  • Use Simple Language: Avoid jargon and technical terms. Explain features and benefits in terms your target market uses and readily understands. 
  • Focus on Benefits: Always link features back to tangible benefits for the user. For instance, instead of just stating “Our software uses AI algorithms,” explain how this technology helps in making data-driven decisions faster and more accurately.
  • Leverage Customer Feedback: Use customer insights to understand which aspects of your SaaS are most valued and how customers use those features, and highlight these use cases in your copy.
  • Focus on Problems and Solutions: Frame your copy around the problems your SaaS solves. Highlighting real-world applications makes it easier for potential customers to see its value.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

  • Overloading with Technical Details: While it’s important to provide key information, overwhelming your audience with too many technicalities can detract from the main value proposition.
  • The Curse of Knowledge: Remember that what is obvious to you and your team members, who are immersed in your product day in and day out, is not obvious to outsiders. Get feedback on your copy from people outside your field.
  • Lack of Consistency: Inconsistent messaging across different platforms can confuse potential customers and dilute your brand’s message.

Conclusion 

Effective B2B SaaS copywriting is about more than just selling a product; it’s about clearly and consistently communicating the value your software brings to the table. From your website and promotional materials to the application itself and every email sent, every touchpoint is an opportunity to reinforce your value proposition.

Remember, whether your SaaS addresses a knowledge gap, an efficiency gap, or both, clarity in your messaging is key. If you find yourself struggling to convey the unique value of your SaaS system, you’re not alone.

At JHMG, we understand these challenges. We have a Storybrand certified guide on our team who specializes in helping B2B SaaS companies clarify their messaging. If you’re looking to enhance your SaaS copywriting and effectively communicate your value proposition, we’re here to help. Reach out to us today about how we can assist in transforming your copywriting into a powerful tool for business growth.

Dr Michelle Cobb‍
COO

Dr. Michelle Nicole Cobb was a software engineer prior to obtaining her Ph.D. in Clinical Psychology from the University of Georgia. She combined her skills while working as an Assistant Professor at Northwestern University Feinberg School of Medicine to lead the design, development, and evaluation of web and mobile phone applications targeted to help people manage anxiety and depression.

Michelle was excited to bring all these experiences with her when she joined JH Media Group in 2017. She has since become a StoryBrand certified guide to help JHMG clients to clarify their messaging and create effective sales funnels.

In her spare time, she enjoys cooking, fostering kittens, and teaching circus arts to adults and children. ‍

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